By Adam Marks




Chapter Three

It was several hours later when the group had finally emptied their final mug of ale, and passed around Dolven’s pipe one last time. The aromatic tobacco battled the pleasant smell of Tyla’s soup cauldron, now sitting cold and empty near the dying fire. Dolven finished tapping the tobacco residue from his pipe, and wrapped it into the folds of his tunic.

“Well now my boy, that was a welcome escape from the day” he sighed, sitting back with a contented smile upon his face. Aidden grinned in agreement. It was nights like this, with his friends around and a hearty meal consumed that they were all able to forget the toils of their life, the hard work, the fact that they were all slaves. Gurdor grunted as he rose from his seat to feed the fire, now glowing amber with coals.

“It’s more the meal from our fine cook than the comforts of this hovel” he smiled, adding several logs to the coals. “Who could guess that we should all wind up the close friend of one our gracious Lords’ personal cooks”? The group chuckled. He was of course, referring to Tyla, whose designated specialty was to cook for Lord Hayden in the fortress. Oftentimes she would whip something up for her friends, and from time to time even managed to sneak some of the finer cuts of meat from Dondel mouths.

“Regardless!” Kildor announced, raising his glass “I would like to propose a toast to our gracious and wonderful host, who will now promptly set about the task of refilling my mug!” Aidden scoffed, throwing his napkin at the man sitting across the table.

“I’ve no more ale to offer you free-loading bastards! You’ve drank a man out of house and ho-“ A knock on the door interrupted his speech, and all heads turned. Bouncing from her chair, Tyla stepped to the door and opened it to reveal Dalen, an acquaintance of them all from the time of their youth, but never more than that. His eyes were wide with excitement and he stepped quickly past Tyla into the hut.

“They’ve caught someone! They’re going to subject him to correction!” He gushed – gesturing first to Aidden and then the group when he realized he had an audience. A silence hung throughout the hut as each member paused to consider Dalen’s words. As the seconds passed, so too did the warmth and joviality the group had worked so hard to escape into.

“And what then should we do Dalen, rush ourselves over to the pit and cheer?!” Gurdor scoffed, standing from the fire and approaching the new guest with anger on his face. “I won’t give those dirty bastards the pleasure! They have me during the day, they can tell me what to do and how to do it – but I will not justify their abuse of my people by providing an audience to it!” With that he stopped short, leaving less than a foot between the two men. Dalen shrank back a pace, turning instead to Aidden and the others.

“Nevertheless, it has been ordered that we all must attend this time – Lord Hayden wishes to address the slav-“

“Don’t call me that you dolt!” growled Dolven. Dalen continued, stepping backwards again, this time towards the door.

“He wishes to address the Nical population before the correction… I believe they will all check to be sure we are there!” Gardon slammed his empty mug of ale upon the table, catching the attention of all in the hut.

“Let them check –“he hissed. “I will not be found among the group… and if it bothers my gracious master… then let him come address me at the splendid home he has provided!” Tyla moved from her place at the door, towards her cloak hanging nearby.

“Nevertheless, I will go…” she stated flatly. “…to see who it is that may be left without a father, or husband”. With that, she slid her cloak over her shoulders and stepped from the hut. Aidden sighed, feeling a wave of nausea rise from the pit of his stomach.

“Someone should go with Tyla, and for that reason alone…” He sighed again, pausing next to his own cloak. Such corrections were nothing he relished experiencing, although he had seen his fair share. “I’ll see you all later – feel free to stay and relax – I’ll talk to you all when I return”. Kildor followed Aidden, and accompanied him with Dalen out of the hut towards Tyla and Lord Hayden.

It was a modest crowd that gathered at the correctional mound - A simple structure standing atop the 10-foot mount of earth and rock. It featured a platform overhanging a large pit in its center, with several columns holding bright torches of fire at their pinnacle. Below the platform, the usually dark and silent pit now raged with plumes of black smoke from an enormous fire.

Lord Hayden surveyed those in attendance with a growing sense of frustration and indignation. “Who do these people think they are to ignore my direct orders!” he thought angrily, rubbing imaginary stubble on his face. He looked over to the Nical man in captivity, brought forward for the theft of several tools from his station in the blacksmith shops. Normally, the punishment for such a crime was branding… but with the pressure being put on him lately… Suddenly, Lord Hayden jerked his hand from his face to his side, resolving that he would make sure those present brought back a strong message to their friends and family.

“Nicals! You have been called here because of my order, and I will address you with my message”. Lord Hayden stepped closer to edge of the platform on which he stood, raising his voice as he continued. “You have all heard of the great castles being built in the northern mountains. These mighty fortresses are to further the Dondel claim - reaching out of our blessed home from the Phoenix Mountains in the east and into this backwards and brutish land in the west. It is for that reason that some of you have found yourselves transferred from your usual jobs to the stone quarry. I expect nothing but your absolute obedience during the time you are assigned there! It is during these next months that we will attempt to meet the quotas put upon us by our King!” Turning slightly, Hayden grabbed a spear from a nearby Dondel soldier. He then walked a pace away from the platform edge, turning suddenly on his heel to face the crowd once more.

To ensure that you will meet the demands set upon me by our King, the Lord Hacenyth will compliment me by visiting this small fortress from his home up north. He is to be the King of the Northern Dondel Realm, as our King Cutio is King of the South. You will act obediently and work harder than you ever have in all of your miserable little lives during his stay… or I will see to it that your are dealt with - properly!” With that Hayden turned to the soldiers holding the Nical slave, running the tip of his spear quickly across his throat as he stepped down off the platform and towards his coach, waiting to take him back to the fortress.

A wicked smile passed over the face of the Dondel soldiers dragging their captive towards the platform’s edge. Dull-eyed and emotionless, it was clear that the slave had experienced a sleepless night, his face was bruised from obvious torture and he stood numb to the world around him. Dondel soldiers stood him up by the edge of the platform, overhanging the now furious flames below. Nearby sat a long pole with it’s brand sitting red-hot in the coals at the bottom of the pit. Another Dondel soldier stepped towards the brand, but instead grabbed a battle-axe lying next to it.

The crowd let out a collective gasp of horror as they realized the new fate of their comrade. A scattered array of cries and moans rose above the rest as the soldier approached his prey, but the slave’s dull gaze showed no account of what was taking place. In one fluid move, the warrior arched his axe-head upward under the prisoners chin and above his shoulders, sending the man’s head catapulting into the air and then into the pit below. Aidden felt Tyla’s grasp on his arm dramatically tighten. Until now, both of them had seen and lived through many of the harsh realities of slavery, but neither of them had ever witnessed the kind of public murder placed before them today.




Gloating with satisfaction, the ax-bearer threw his weapon to the ground and turned away while the two soldiers holding the mans decapitated body quickly threw his corpse into the flames below, one cursing at the splashes of blood on his chain mail. The other Dondel warriors followed their lead and before long, the mound and it’s platform were empty, with only the crackling flames in the pit below breaking a stunned and eerie silence.




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